October Girl

Marc Luna "Now?" I raised an eyebrow, "signing papers without the joy of wedding cake is no fun." "I don't care! I want to get married.... now!" She shrieked. "Ok." ...

Rogue (Robyn) I heard the gun shot. "Oh, no." I said, Dent had probably shot off his foot. I was scared at the idea. I started to run... I ran ...

Rogue (Robyn) "Lark sweetheart. I-" She kept walking and I sighed, she didn't want to talk about it. She'd have to either get over it or it was going to ...

Rogue (Robyn) "Oh forget Rusty, Dent won't be able to go in the show tonight. Oh this is all my fault!" I said. "What do you mean." Kaiya said. "I ...

Rogue (Robyn) I started to step out to talk to Kaiya, "Kaiya I know this is your first show darling and I want to say-" I walked out from behind ...

I agree with Sofiel, this isn't blah at all. I liked the first and second verse. But you want to start off slow and end large. I just didn't see ...

***oh c'mon, we don't have THAT much power ***Rolls eyes*** Jessica He was about to grab the scientest (not the general, cuz he's like unkillable.) The scientest only laughed when ...

(Marc Luna) "When the hell did things get so complicated?" I muttered. "I think maybe when-" "Marry me." I cut her off. "What?" Her eyes were wide. "Mary me." I ...

Rogue (Robyn) I looked down and put my hand in it. My hand was the smallest even though I was one of the oldest girls. I didn't let any tears ...

Jessica As they moved us into the room, they turned on a machine, it let out an ear splitting sound and I screamed, it was so loud I could almost ...

Thank you for the heads up. Other wise I would have been like "you need a coma here. Period here. You're not using proper grammer here." lol just kidding. This ...

Jess My eyes opened but it took forever for them to focus. I awoke with a man by my side, I never seen his face before. I turned to see ...

**just go along with me ok?*** "Jamison!" Yelled the general, "damnit all to hell he was my best man. Restrain him!" It took about 15 men in doing so, the ...

***ok I'm narrating! But not from my point of view**** "Are you sure it's this way?" "As sure as I'll ever be sir." "What the hell is going on down ...

Jessica As he kissed me, something sparked in my mind, I saw something like the future like a vision of people runing towards us trying to hunt us. I broke ...